FIC + ART: Then, Now, Forever

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Title: Then, Now, Forever
Team: Radium’s Sunrise (impishinklings, llaeyro & _melodic_)
Tropes: Hurt/Comfort and Pining
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *AU: Sirius lives, men kissing (art), blow job, fingering, anal sex, flangst*
Medium and/or word count: ~6500, pen/pencil and a copious number of erasers.
Summary: Perhaps, one day, Remus will need him the way he wants to be needed. Sirius know he will still be here, waiting.
Notes: The team would like to thank shiftylinguini for casting her speedy yet thoroughly critical eye over both the fic and art. Also, a huge thank you to the mods for their patience and understanding.

Then, Now, Forever

Comments

[brighty18.livejournal.com]

Interestingly, for a trope fest, that was an exceedingly interesting story. Sure, I've read stories before in which one or the other other were in a coma, but never do I recall one this richly detailed and seriously well-written. The way you inter-wove the memories and the present day situations was really clever and felt very natural. It followed the course of the human mind brilliantly - as in, the story had great flow and very much felt as if coming from the perspective on of one in Sirius' condition. Little details like the clicking of shoes (and McGonagall's hallucinatory boobs) made this piece simple sing! I felt for both of them here, but there was something about Sirius' plight that really grabbed me by the heart.

And, again, of this was written my multiple people, it was virtually impossible to tell, for it all felt very cohesive and natural. I

Hilda was a great character, too, so kind and very funny. Original characters can be tricky, but you did such a fantastic job with her. And I'm glad that Sirius appreciated her, too. LOL

And the illustrations were gorgeous; I very much liked the way you concentrated on individual objects (or, rather, body parts). It created a lot of emotion with some deceptively simple images. (I say deceptive because I know that hands are really hard to do!) The use of color in those green eyes made that illustration especially compelling.

Great story!

[abyss-valkyrie.livejournal.com]

This was so nicely done, the Sirius not-dead idea with Remus being all loyal and protective. I absolutely love Hilda!haha!!

I adored the drawings, there's something about drawing instances and parts of a picture that you guys(don't know who!) did very well. My favourite one has to be the shoe and the last one though!Haha!

Sirius's dreams were something else,so natural and weird,loved them!!

[llaeyro]

Aw, thank you! I've been pleasantly surprised by how popular Hilda has been =) I'm quite fond of my shoes, they turned out just how I wanted them to (which didn't happen for anything else, ha) but that last one is my favourite too ;)

The natural (and sexy) was _melodic_ and the weird would be impishinklings xD

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥