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rs_collabTitle: The Smallest Moments of the First War
Team: Toujours Purple (![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
chalada & mustntgetmy)
Tropes: Break up & get back together
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *none*
Medium and/or word count: Word count: 5.8k; Medium for the artwork: markers
Summary: AU: A bad duel forces Sirius to reflect on things that happened before the war even began and moves him to change the course of the war.
The Smallest Moments of the First War
Team: Toujours Purple (
chalada & mustntgetmy)Tropes: Break up & get back together
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *none*
Medium and/or word count: Word count: 5.8k; Medium for the artwork: markers
Summary: AU: A bad duel forces Sirius to reflect on things that happened before the war even began and moves him to change the course of the war.
The Smallest Moments of the First War
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Date: 2016-06-17 10:40 am (UTC)I really enjoyed this story and collab.
There's some gorgeous writing here. the rough kiss and the quiet rebuke and the entire second paragraph ...
The pacing and energy of the very last paragraph was wonderful; it made your ending seem prophetically inevitable.
I liked the idea of Sirius doing raw, spell-less magic.
My favorite pictures were the last two. I loved Remus standing in his socks in a sea of letters he wrote himself. The last close-up is lovely. Sirius' expression speaks volumes.
I liked having the pictures interspersed with the story. It helps me to remember how very young they were when this all happened. It's ironic that Sirius is thinking the same thing (so young) about his attacker.